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- Ammit September 2023
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Need your feedback on this draft PRE art
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Here is our first draft, what needs to be tweaked? Let us know!Need to contact me? Read this first.
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I'd round out the nose, looks like the reference you use was flaring their nostrils. They aren't so square in the muzzle. And I'd straighten up those knobby knees, look like they are damaged.
For the foal I wouldn't make them so cresty. Their neck is still underdeveloped at that age.Post edited by CheshireFarms at 2023-09-11 07:17:29 -
You'll have to define what you mean by knobby knees.Post edited by Ammit at 2023-09-11 07:35:20Need to contact me? Read this first.
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the adult horse is gorgeous. the "baby" looks like a long yearling, but it is also beautiful.
so my only complaint is the foal looks too mature. -
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Sorry about that, here are some examples:
The hocks look like they have swelling and damage https://www.equinecool.co.za/equinecool/index.php/ct-menu-item-5/ct-menu-item-11 , they are Capped, Curbed and have Bog spavins
When they should be smoother https://cloudfront.horsenetwork.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/27113705/hock-1200x675.jpg -
Are you talking about the knees or the hocks?Need to contact me? Read this first.
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I agree with CheshireFarms regarding the Hocks and the foal neck. I also think they have a slightly more rounded ( convex ) profile on the face with flatter nostrils on the Adult.
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If this works ( I kinda stink and this lol )
The horse should have smoother and flatter knees :
https://www.bing.com/images/search?view=detailV2&ccid=XKr7M1b6&id=3599B1F37D819300AA48EA18F526A10C543D33B3&thid=OIP.XKr7M1b6o2HEjfBL1GQbYAHaE7&mediaurl=https://horsesandfoals.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/06/Lusitano-Horse-Breed.jpg&cdnurl=https://th.bing.com/th/id/R.5caafb3356faa361c48df04bd4641b60?rik=szM9VAyhJvUY6g&pid=ImgRaw&r=0&exph=665&expw=999&q=lusitano+horse&simid=607989665441122112&FORM=IRPRST&ck=1C366C45399122E8D5E43875D5840456&selectedIndex=0&idpp=overlayview&ajaxhist=0&ajaxserp=0 -
I don't belive a convex profile is correct for the PRE. You may be thinking of the Lusitanio.Need to contact me? Read this first.
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Can you both clarify if you mean knees or hocks as you now have both said both interchangeably. ThanksNeed to contact me? Read this first.
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AHHH CRud , you are correct >< Sorry Ammit I was thinking Lucitano ;
here is a nice Profile or a "resting " nostril as well as knees and Hocks of a PRE
https://www.shutterstock.com/image-photo/beautify-horse-grazing-green-grass-fields-412537213Post edited by annismyrph at 2023-09-11 08:45:36 -
@annismyrph I think that must be the wrong link.
Are you trying to say the art needs both the knees and the hocks adjusted? I am having a hard time getting a straight answer from this thread ol. :DNeed to contact me? Read this first.
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The horse is perfect in my eyes!
But there is somthing strange with the resting hindleg of the foal. I am not sure, but I think maybe the curved line on the backside of that leg make him look a little sickle-hoocked?
I think he may need to have a sharper point/tip of that hock, and maybe a more clear bend in the knee on that leg to support the pose? -
yes, both the knees and the hocks need to be smoothed out lol Cheshire gave a great example for the hocks ; and ofc my link is baad >< I have a hard time figuring out how to do that lol Operator Error am sure.
Also the neck on the foal is too thick. The neck is much less developed until 6 or so when they have built is up with riding and exercise. -
I wonder if the near hind on the foal just needs to be brought down a touch so it doesn't read as floaty?Need to contact me? Read this first.
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Sorry, me and my use of alliteration.
Ok so the answer is both on the Adult.
The hocks look like they have swelling and damage https://www.equinecool.co.za/equinecool/index.php/ct-menu-item-5/ct-menu-item-11 , they are Capped, Curbed and have Bog spavins. When they should be smoother https://cloudfront.horsenetwork.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/10/27113705/hock-1200x675.jpg
The knees also should me smoother at the carpus and carpal joint. The carpus is a bit more dramatically indented and the carpal is very exaggerated on the front leg in the back. I attribute that to artistic expression.
And for the profile, here is an example of a relaxed head https://www.ehorses.com/magazine/wp-content/uploads/Andalusian-Horse-head-brown-scaled.jpg the profile slopes down instead of square at the nostrils.Post edited by CheshireFarms at 2023-09-11 09:13:48Thanked by 1Ammit -
Very helpful thanks! :)Need to contact me? Read this first.
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I think its the mane on the foal that's giving the illusion of being cresty. I think it wont read that way once it's coloured in.
I'd love to see just a bit more arch and crest on the Adult, but that might just be stylistic preference for me. Looking at pictures of Andalusians, the amount of crest and arch seems to vary.
The make or break for me is when I see them shaded in lol -
The horse we used as a neck reference is a 4 or 5-month-old at the dam's side for inspections. So I know for a fact the foals do indeed have next that size. I think you are right that it's an illusion.
As for the crest, people do not seem particularly excited for this breed despite voting heavily for it. Maybe it's a not enough neck issue?Post edited by Ammit at 2023-09-11 14:30:12Need to contact me? Read this first.
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And/or maybe very long mane?
Foal's neck look good to me, for an old baroque type (not the sportive more popular today), and the artwork in general is super! -
I think you might be right. That big elegant arched neck on the adults is probably a big draw. I like Andalusians that are very curvy. The curve is spot on over the hip but kind of falls flat on the neck.
While Andalusians do have a straighter profile than Lusitanos, it looks like some do have a slight curve to their profile. So playing into that just a little might help.
The other thing is, I wonder how many voted on Andalusian with Lusitanos in mind? I know there was an issue with the reference thread with people posting Lusitanos. My other suggestion would be take some inspiration from the Lusitano and do more of a generic "Spanish horse" for now and do the more strict Andy and Lus later on. -
@Herzeloyde do you think the mane in the art is too long or too short? I can't tell. :DNeed to contact me? Read this first.
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I decided to a little fiddling to show kind of following the curve of the hip up into the neck and then following it a bit into the head. Far from perfect because I did it with my finger on my phone (and I got a little carried away because I was having fun lol) but to kind of give an image to what I was thinking.
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His head is straight, but he has excellent curves. -
here is a quick and dirty edit giving this horse some more neck, profile and shoulder (ignore the hind end it had some updates already that are not showing)
Is this more what you are thinking of?Post edited by Ammit at 2023-09-11 15:33:59Need to contact me? Read this first.
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I have also been thinking that, that people confuse the PRE for the Lusitano, who have a more curved conformation with big, powerful body and convex profile.
The Spanish horse that many people tend to idealize have big neck and very long hair and impressive front with high knee action, but a smaller topline and hindquarters than the Lusitano.
Maybe the full name, Pura Raza Española will look more intriguing for players who are not so familiar with the correct name for the breed yet?
I don't think making a "spanish horse" with the lusitano as a reference is a good solution, they really are two different breeds, with different qualities, breeding goals and conformation for a reason. It would be the same as using Arabian horse as a reference for a Barb horse, or a Shire as a reference for a Clydesdale, or a Morgan as a reference for a Saddlebred.
Maybe this is what people have in mind when they think about a stereotypical PRE? About the profile on the drawing, I think it is very good for the breed. You can find PREs with slightly convex nose, but also with a concave and a straight nose, and some even with a mix, like an S-curve.
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I agree I don't think making up a pretend breed is the way to go here. It could very much be a problem of people not knowing what they are asking for. I would rather just turn this into a Lusitano than make a hybrid but we will need to do some investigating to figure out why people are not digging this one.Need to contact me? Read this first.
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@Ammit; I think both of the drawings look very typical for PREs! The first one maybe more typical of the popular modern horse today, and the 2nd one for the more old style horse, both of them capture what I think about when I think about the breed. but I don't know about the others. I suspect long hair may be something a lot of people appreciate with the horse
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Ammit, that update is so much better already! Looks so much more like I would expect!
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@Ammit the quick and dirty edit is awesome! Move front legs down a bit, they are higher than the back legs. Foal just needs to have knees and hocks level to each other. Beautiful work, I will definitely be going broke and my hubby may disown me. LolPost edited by RKO at 2023-09-11 20:51:56Bluegrass id:182429
Forest id: 289
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Ammit , the second drawing was MUCH more what I had in mind ! Jenx is getting so much better drawing the "big doggies" !
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I like the new edit as well. Though I think the hocks could use a little smoothing on the back side.
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I wouldn't personally go more than that last update. The problem is that everyone saying they like more crest, are also only looking at stallions, which are more cresty than mares and geldings, and the crest typically gets bigger with age.
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I need to put out something people like looking at though, and they like looking at stallions.Need to contact me? Read this first.
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Will mares look different from stallions?Thanked by 1annismyrph
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@Fiddler ; THAT would be amazing! Mares are much more Feminine in just about every breed.
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Only if you ask for specific mare versions of BC and then provide me with mare references.
We have stallions and mares able to use different art for that reason but people have to ask for it and so far it's not being asked for.
ETA: This art is a bit more marish than what it is being edited into but people are not excited about it. Which means it is a bad idea for me to put out more marish art because people won't buy it.Post edited by Ammit at 2023-09-12 06:43:50Need to contact me? Read this first.
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