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Over all it looks good, maybe add just a bit of size to adult, but I don't know what type of ID horse you are trying for. I like this type of ID. The foal looks good it could be a foal by the two horses below.

stallion example

Mare example

I like neck and head set of this bay who looks like he is a bit lighter in bone to the black stud

Nice work on the art, thank you @Ammit and team

Hind end looks a little light

@Ammit there is one black horse, one bay horse and a grey horse, but here is the bay stallion. This horse has a nice neck and head.

@Ammit you are very welcome, I would like to see a cleaner throat latch (the area that connects the head to the neck) and the neck set just a tad higher on the body. The foal to me looks good, it has a nice neck and head, the hind end on foal could be a tad lower too, but the high rump may be do to were back legs are set on the foal.

Couple tiny things I see.

On the adult, the withers seem a bit too far towards the back. Not sure if the back needs to start a little sooner maybe and bring the withers towards the neck.

On the adult, the front offside cannon seems thinner/lighter.

On the foal, the rear offside fetlock seems bulbous.

Can you give more info than "odd"? Jenx won't know what that means. :)

Looks great overall. I do agree that the hindquarters is a little too light. And maybe the hooves are a bit too small? The pasterns and hooves could be heavier, yet still clean like they are. The adult's head could be slightly more roman, and seeing the ridge for the eye looks off to me. I don't think we would see that from a full sideview. Or maybe just getting rid of the eye ridge would fix it and keep the nose mostly straight. The way it is makes the head seem three-quarter view at the forehead but sideview lower down. And the line of the mouth I think should point towards the poll more instead of straight up.

The foal looks pretty good, except the topline of the hip. It could be taller, rounder, smoother, and a little farther forward, like these images, just to show what I'm talking about. And maybe the pastern joints could be a little bigger and the neck a little more crested.

Just so everyone knows we tend to find photos cause more confusion than they help and the photos are seldom what we need at this stage. It is always very welcome to draw on/edit the art though as that tends to be the most helpful.

Here are my slight edits to the line art. I made quite a few small changes so opening the original and edited images in new tabs and flipping back and forth will probably show them better than me writing a list here.

I like it, anything I'd have to contribute would just be nit picking.

I think Cavalynn did a great job on "fixing" the topline of the adult ! As well as fixing the hips of the foal !

Thank you so much everyone we really appreciate the feedback and doubly so those who made edits on the image for us.